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The Wild Wind #6416897 01/02/19 08:41 PM 01/02/19 08:41 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 3,423 Ontario, Canada S slydogx OP trapper
slydogx OP trapper S Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 3,423 Ontario, Canada	Re-posting this, to get the ball rolling in this forum. I wrote this poem in a flash of inspiration in 2014. I will be framing a printed copy to hang below my trophy buck shot in 2017 THE WILD WIND ‘Tis a mystery, from whence the Wild Wind blows, a vast northern landscape of pine trees and snows, But my mind wanders there, as it reddens my nose, With the scents of the rivers where black water flows, And forests that spring from the Earth’s granite bones, All this I feel, as the Wild Wind moans. Mosses and lichens and dead leaves and stones, All crunch underfoot as I travel alone. And the Wild Wind whispers, so soft in my ear, “The hunt is afoot, your quarry is near.” And my heart hardens fast against hope, against fear, My mind focused and sharpened and deadly and clear. And life spills on the on the snow, in the bright Autumn sun, The cold Wild Wind and the hunter are one. Another loop in the fabric of life has been spun, The story’s not ended, but this chapter is done… Just happy to be here.

Re: The Wild Wind [Re: slydogx] #6507264 04/01/19 06:35 AM 04/01/19 06:35 AM
Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 17,379 Coeur d' Alene, Idaho J James "Minka"
James "Minka" J Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 17,379 Coeur d' Alene, Idaho	Good poem. Excellent details and imagery. ("...the Earth's granite bones.") Good rhyme and meter. I like the use of various senses at work--what the narrator saw, heard, smelled. You should do some market research and send it off to several magazines that buy outdoor poems. Some editor might buy it. Jim Forum Infidel since 2001 "And that troll bs is something triggered snowflakes say when they dont like what someone posts." - Boco

Re: The Wild Wind [Re: slydogx] #6508111 04/02/19 08:56 AM 04/02/19 08:56 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 3,423 Ontario, Canada S slydogx OP trapper
slydogx OP trapper S Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 3,423 Ontario, Canada	Thanks James, I know it is a repost but I thought it was worth getting this forum off the ground. I remember you had a great post about submitting such things that is unfortunately lost to the sands of internet time. Could you maybe PM me some info about how/where to submit? I have no shame LOL, I'll take a swing at submitting for publication. Just happy to be here.

Re: The Wild Wind [Re: slydogx] #6512919 04/08/19 07:50 AM 04/08/19 07:50 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 3,423 Ontario, Canada S slydogx OP trapper
slydogx OP trapper S Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 3,423 Ontario, Canada	I have submitted it for consideration to an outdoor magazine (yes, just one LOL). I guess we'll see soon enough. Just happy to be here.

Re: The Wild Wind [Re: slydogx] #6527055 04/28/19 04:05 AM 04/28/19 04:05 AM
Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 17,379 Coeur d' Alene, Idaho J James "Minka"
James "Minka" J Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 17,379 Coeur d' Alene, Idaho	Good luck with it. Jim Forum Infidel since 2001 "And that troll bs is something triggered snowflakes say when they dont like what someone posts." - Boco

Re: The Wild Wind [Re: slydogx] #6531063 05/03/19 08:00 PM 05/03/19 08:00 PM
Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 17,017 Goldsboro, North Carolina Paul Dobbins "Trapperman custodian"
Paul Dobbins "Trapperman custodian" Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 17,017 Goldsboro, North Carolina	That is a great poem. Thanks for posting it. John 14:6 Jesus answered, “I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me."

Re: The Wild Wind [Re: slydogx] #6677548 11/27/19 09:18 PM 11/27/19 09:18 PM
Joined: May 2018 Posts: 645 N/E Il. NOT Chicago!! S squacks trapper
squacks trapper S Joined: May 2018 Posts: 645 N/E Il. NOT Chicago!!	Very nice. Descriptive. I like it. Suggestion if i may. Life spills on the snow, in the bright autumn sun